Sebastian's Story Work In Progress

Working on the next project in my plan to do 10 pages a month. These are the start of Sebastian's Story, which is kind of a working title, but I can't think of anything better. What I'm trying to work out, is out of the bottom two pages here, which tells the story better. I don't know. I like the way the last one looks with the distorted perspective on the room, but I think the picture of the girl tells the story clearer. What do you think?