"Sebastian's Story" Sketches.

I was working on "Sebastian's Story" tonight, and I got to the part where Sebastian enters the lair of the Ragman, and I was drawing the henchmen, but realised I didn't really know who these guys were. So I thought I better finalise some designs before I went too much further. These were the sketches I did as first ideas (and probably final).

Sebastian's Story Work In Progress

Working on the next project in my plan to do 10 pages a month. These are the start of Sebastian's Story, which is kind of a working title, but I can't think of anything better. What I'm trying to work out, is out of the bottom two pages here, which tells the story better. I don't know. I like the way the last one looks with the distorted perspective on the room, but I think the picture of the girl tells the story clearer. What do you think?